Apologies to those who have already read Chapter 14 of
A Difference of Visions. After discussions and some valuable input by
jaxomsride, I have made some major changes to the middle scene where Reya is interacting with the Kirsten character. As always, new changes marked in blue.
A Difference of Visions, Revised Chapter 14
Though showing how she nearly died may put some of them off the whole idea of Challenges.