August 4th, 2007

Twin Souls

New Patterns and Old Friends: The ongoing saga of story three...

I think I've figured out a way to finish story three without having to slot in another story between Fighting Back and the planned beginning of story four, now called That Which is Hidden. Will probably end up with a much longer story than anticipated, but at least it's better than having to insert another story. At chapter eleven now, which is infinitely better than where I was two weeks ago with this story. 

Have shifted half of the Jenna/Cally storyline to story four. Somehow they both ended up with two major tasks in story three, but Jenna really wanted to get to the second task. 

With a little persistance, finally got the amateurs to get a move on and put together a plan to rescue Avon. Didn't realize that putting two professors and two engineers together would result in so little useful action.

As  reapermumsuggested, Argus and Vila don't have to have a major storyline, so they're going to play more of a support role to Cally and Jenna in story four; but it will be a good opportunity to do some dialogue and character development for them.