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Another attempt at a freeform poem 
24th-Feb-2010 10:25 pm
Avon's early thoughts about Cally.


Avon and Cally, Part 1

Woman
beating
the arrogant bastard.
Perfect.
She draws
my attention.
Piques my curiosity.
I stare.
An alien?
Wariness.
A rebel,
should snarl,
but keep staring.
I ask questions.
She is
Loyal.
Avenges.
I understand.
Anna.

Technically proficient.
Impressive.
Intelligent.
Quiet.
Appreciated.
Work well
together.
Comfortable.
Unlike
with some.
Sneer at Blake.

Finally
someone
I can get along with
on this ship.
Pity
she is
a rebel.
Hopeless disease of
dreamers,
mindless violence.
But she
is promising.
Beautiful.
Bears watching.

She comes
shows interest in my work.
Stunned, I stare.
Beautiful, interested.
Interesting.
Must
stop
staring.

Connection made.

She acts strange,
voice odd.
Is a threat.
Of course.
Irony.
Must stop
her.
Cold, hard logic.
Shut her out.
Good thing
I never
let her in.
Trust is only
dangerous
if you rely
on it.

It was an alien.
Not her.
But
she is a weakness.
Susceptible to be
used
to harm.
I should
be wary.
Am wary.
But
I stare
when she appears.
My heart beats
faster.
Am speechless
again.
She has
captured me.
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Comments 
25th-Feb-2010 03:34 am (UTC)
Anonymous
Love it.

Just is him.

Do more.

Like reading him, his thoughts.

25th-Feb-2010 03:38 am (UTC)
Thanks. Glad you like it. And good freeform yourself ;)

Edited at 2010-02-25 03:38 am (UTC)
25th-Feb-2010 04:35 am (UTC)
Poor Avon. In love in spite of himself.
25th-Feb-2010 04:37 am (UTC)
Oh, yes ;) I love your icon.
25th-Feb-2010 10:24 am (UTC)
Thanks! It's from a manip I made inspired by a story. I've made some new Avon/Cally manips. There over here: http://jacteest.livejournal.com/72858.html
All worksafe I would say.
25th-Feb-2010 02:30 pm (UTC)
Those are wonderful! Would you mind if I borrow a couple? I'd credit you, of course.
25th-Feb-2010 03:48 pm (UTC)
Please do.
26th-Feb-2010 01:36 am (UTC)
Thanks!
25th-Feb-2010 07:58 am (UTC)
Such a magical pair - I do wonder, if the series were made now, if the writers would have made more of them?
25th-Feb-2010 02:32 pm (UTC)
My guess would be yes. I think we'd probably see far more of Avon and Cally. But then, that would be what I would do if I were a writer on the series ;)
25th-Feb-2010 03:50 pm (UTC)
I've been neglecting B7 recently, but wasn't there talk about a revival of the series? Maybe you could sign on as a writer! I'd love to see more A/C.
25th-Feb-2010 06:06 pm (UTC)
The only thing I've heard of recently is the audio series.

I'd love to be hired as a writer. Sigh. My mission is to write more Avon and more Avon/Cally.
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