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B7 Perceptions: A Difference of Visions - Chapter 14 Revision 
28th-Apr-2009 11:46 am
Apologies to those who have already read Chapter 14 of A Difference of Visions. After discussions and some valuable input by jaxomsride, I have made some major changes to the middle scene where Reya is interacting with the Kirsten character. As always, new changes marked in blue.

A Difference of Visions, Revised Chapter 14
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Comments 
28th-Apr-2009 11:53 pm (UTC)
Interesting changes.
Though showing how she nearly died may put some of them off the whole idea of Challenges.
28th-Apr-2009 11:56 pm (UTC)
The dying part wasn't part of the Challenges though. That happened after. Perhaps I could have her stress that the Challenges will be safe.
29th-Apr-2009 12:04 am (UTC)
If not "safe" at least not fatal or "maiming".
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