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Revisions revisions....or another chapter that would not let me go... 
23rd-Jun-2008 10:27 am
Sorry for this...

I was never satisfied with the first scene in chapter 20; and it would not let me go either. I've made some revisions now that improve some of the dynamics. Marked in blue.

B7: Knowing the Enemy - Chapter 20 - Revised Version
Twin Souls
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23rd-Jun-2008 10:31 pm (UTC)
Well, selfishly I'm glad chapter 20 wouldn't let go of you. It's given me a chance to catch up. ;) After 5 weeks away I've been struggling to get up to date.

I'm really enjoying Vila and Avon re-establishing their friendship. And Jenna still in the background struggling with her own demons is promising.
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